No Smoking..!
Flashback of life gave me a picture,
A picture so pure as perfection,
Ugly would have been the face of the future,
Never had thought in the weirdest of imagination.
Smoke all around me as mist of hazard,
Found peace in the lap of smoky archangel,
Opened my eyes to the world of archfiend,
Dreamed about stick of smoke all nighttime.
Looked at lost loved ones as they part,
As my spirit slowly being sacrifice,
Killing me unknowingly taking my time apart,
Soon as I realized it was too late for discontinuance.
Never thought the first smoky night,
Would lead me to the last moment,
I wish I was strong inside to fight,
Now I realize the devil is waiting outside,
Smoked all night as there was no end,
Ironically there was none,
To the loved one I would have been kind,
Manically I died, surrendered myself.
--Kiran Kumar
6 Comments
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Comment by P.J.Boy on May 2, 2008 at 12:29am - Thats fucking brain numbing, insane mate. Great poem.
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Comment by kiran_kumar on May 2, 2008 at 12:35am - thanks a lot buddy.... hope ppl stop smoking.
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Comment by Jay aka CruciFire on May 2, 2008 at 4:21pm - nice poem... a little more rhyme wud have had better effect me thinks..
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Comment by Illusionist on May 2, 2008 at 7:53pm - Awesome...
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Comment by Illusionist on May 2, 2008 at 7:53pm
- Anti-Sutta gaana... \m/ o \m/
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Comment by Bhushan Shiwalkar on May 5, 2008 at 11:03pm
- nice poem...i think now I shud quit readin' this kindda stuff.
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